The Life of PRAISEWORTHY
Chapter 33: The Fire in the Mind
The heavy autumn rain began to fall in hard, steady sheets, soaking Hunza’s canvas jacket as he stood alone in the dark alleyway.
Julian Vance was gone. The sound of his smooth leather boots had long faded into the night, but his cold, quiet words remained trapped inside Hunza’s head, ringing louder than the thunder across the bay.
Twelve young dockworkers. Locked inside the hold so his escape was clean.
Hunza didn't run home. He didn't yell. He stood in the downpour, his broad hands clenched into tight fists at his sides, his dark eyes staring into the empty fog.
His analytical mind—the brain that calculated flour sacks, river tides, and trade routes—was running through every piece of the puzzle. Julian was a master of psychological warfare. He knew that the fastest way to break a strong building was to destroy its foundation. If Julian could make Hunza lose faith in Old Man Rashid, Hunza would walk away, and District 4 would fall without a fight.
Is it a lie to break my resolve? Hunza thought, stepping out of the alleyway onto the wet cobblestones. Or is it the dark truth Rashid has been hiding behind his locked door?
Hunza knew he couldn't act on emotion. He needed facts. And there was only one man in the district who knew the exact truth about the night the Salt Cut burned.
At 2:00 AM, Hunza pushed open the back door of Farooq Flour Mills.
The yard was empty and dark. Rainwater poured off the tin roof in heavy streams, splashing into the mud. Up in the glass-paneled office, a single yellow lamp was still burning.
Hunza walked up the wooden stairs, his boots dripping wet, and pushed open the office door.
Mr. Farooq was sitting at his desk, staring at a cup of cold tea. He looked up, his sharp eyes instantly noticing the pale, stone-hard expression on Hunza’s face.
"Hunza?" Farooq asked, setting down his cup. "What happened? You look like you've seen a ghost."
"I met the ghost," Hunza said quietly, his deep voice cutting through the sound of the rain outside.
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Farooq froze. "Julian?"
"He met me in the alley near Calle Siete," Hunza said, stepping closer to the desk. "He held a brass pistol to my chest."
Farooq gasped, his hand reaching for his cane as if to stand up, but Hunza raised a hand to calm him.
"He didn't pull the trigger," Hunza continued, his voice flat and steady. "He said he respects intelligence. He told me he is bringing the police marshals tomorrow with forged warrants to arrest Master Rashid for forty-year-old syndicate crimes."
Farooq’s face went completely pale. "Police warrants... Julian is using the law to destroy him."
"That is not all he told me, Mr. Farooq," Hunza said, leaning over the desk, his dark eyes locked onto his boss's face. "He told me about the night the flagship burned in the Salt Cut thirty years ago. He said Rashid locked twelve young, unarmed workers inside the lower hold so they couldn't untie the ship... and let them burn alive."
The room went dead silent. The only sound was the rain hammering against the glass windows.
Mr. Farooq closed his eyes. His old, weathered face seemed to age five years in a single second. He lowered his head, a long, painful sigh escaping his chest.
"He didn't tell you the whole story, Hunza," Farooq whispered, his voice trembling with old grief.
Hunza’s chest tightened, but he kept his voice firm. "Then tell me the truth, Mr. Farooq. Did Rashid leave those men to die?"
Farooq looked up, his eyes filled with sad honesty.
"Thirty years ago, when Rashid decided to break away from the syndicate, he tried to sneak those twelve young men off the ship first," Farooq explained softly. "They were just boys from the upper valley who wanted to go home. But Julian’s lieutenants caught them at the hatch. A fight broke out, the lantern smashed, and the oil spilled onto the dry timber. The fire spread in seconds."
Farooq touched his wooden cane with shaking fingers.
"Rashid tried to break the iron latch from the outside," Farooq continued. "He burned his own hands to the bone trying to pull the beam away—you can still see the scars on his forearms if you look closely. But the ammunition in the hold caught fire. The ship blew apart. Rashid barely survived the explosion. He didn't lock them in, Hunza... but he blames himself every single day because he couldn't save them."
The heavy weight on Hunza’s chest finally loosened. The dark cloud of doubt cleared from his mind.
Julian had taken a tragic, bloody memory and twisted it into a poison blade to murder Rashid’s honor.
"Julian knows the marshals are coming tomorrow," Hunza said, his mind instantly locking back into tactical mode. "He wants Rashid to surrender in shame. He wants the district to watch their elder dragged away in iron chains."
"What can we do?" Farooq asked helplessly. "If the marshals have official warrants, we cannot fight the government with fists."
Hunza’s jaw set like an iron bar. His dark eyes burned with sharp, unyielding determination.
"We don't fight the marshals," Hunza said, his deep voice steady and strong. "We outsmart the man who paid for the warrants. Julian thinks he is playing chess against a broken old man. Tomorrow, he learns that the mill has a new supervisor."
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