The Last Debug: I Rewrote My Death

Chapter 58: Tommy the Key

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They walked for almost a full hour, stopping only twice, and each time it was Tommy who decided when the worrying and the walking had to pause.

"It’s close," he said, for the third time, in a voice nobody quite believed anymore.

"You said that half an hour ago," Dana said.

"And I was right then too. Distance is relative."

Nadia laughed, a tired laugh, the first sound of anything like humor since they’d seen Pierce. Even Tommy smiled, a small, sad smile, but a real one.

The city around them was different here, narrower, more crowded with old buildings, like they’d wandered into a neighborhood nobody had touched in decades. A few windows were still lit, dim lights moving behind curtains, proof that other people were still out there trying to live their nights normally, despite everything.

"Where exactly are you taking us?" Kael asked.

"A basement," Tommy said. "Under an old building Harun and I used to store extra equipment in. Nobody knows it exists except me, and maybe him, but he’s dead now, so I suppose that just leaves me."

"Very reassuring," Dana said.

"Life is full of surprises."

Mira looked at Kael. He’d been quiet for minutes, his eyes moving between the walls and the side alleys in a way she wasn’t used to seeing from him.

"Kael?"

"I feel something," he said quietly. "I don’t know what exactly. Just... a feeling."

Everyone stopped.

"A feeling of what?" Nadia said.

"That we’re not alone on this street."

Tommy looked around quickly, grabbing Dana’s arm without meaning to, like he was searching for something to hold onto.

"Maybe it’s just nerves," Kael said, trying to soften the weight of his own words. "After the night we’ve had, it’s normal for—"

He stopped.

The sound came from above them this time, not ahead, not behind. Everyone looked up, at the roof of a low building on their right, and saw the same shape, tall, wrong-angled, standing there, perfectly still, like it had been waiting for them for a long time.

Nobody moved for a full second. Even the wind stopped.

"It knows the way," Mira whispered. "How does it know the way?"

"No time to ask," Kael said. "Run."

But the creature moved before any of them could, dropping from the roof in a motion that wasn’t a jump and wasn’t a fall, something in between, and landed directly in front of them, cutting off the path they would have fled down.

"This way!" Tommy shouted, pointing to a narrow side alley.

They ran. The creature followed, with a deceptive slowness, the distance between them shrinking in a way that didn’t match the strangeness of its steps.

Halfway down the alley, Dana tripped on a jutting stone and hit her knees hard.

"Dana!"

Kael turned, but Tommy was closer.

Tommy shoved her with both hands, with more force than his thin body seemed capable of, and she slid forward, clear of the creature’s path.

Tommy didn’t move fast enough to follow her.

Time, in that moment, didn’t move at the same speed for Kael. He saw everything in strange slow motion: Tommy’s hand, still outstretched from pushing her, his eyes meeting Kael’s for a fraction of a second, something in that look that wasn’t fear so much as a quiet, calm acceptance.

Then there was no more Tommy.

It wasn’t violent the way Kael had expected. There was no blood, no long scream. It was more like the creature had "folded" Tommy into itself, silently, fast enough that his mind refused to believe what it had just seen.

"No," Dana said, from the ground, her voice completely broken. "No. No, no, no."

Kael stood frozen, unable to move, for a very long second.

The creature turned toward them slowly, as if assessing what it had just done with no clear feeling behind it — no satisfaction, no regret.

Something in Kael’s chest exploded.

It wasn’t anger in the usual sense. It was heavier than that, deeper, something like an internal collapse that immediately hardened into cold resolve.

Everything around him seemed to stop for a moment. Sound, light, even the pain in his burned hand, all of it receded to somewhere far away, leaving only him, the creature, and the short distance between them.

Kael charged it, with no plan, no calculation, just a raw surge of something he hadn’t felt this clearly before.

He hit it, and this time, for the first time, the creature took one full step back.

Everyone froze. Even the creature itself seemed to pause, recalculating something.

Mira looked at Kael’s wrist. There was no system message. No warning, no level, nothing. Just the red glow, sharper than she’d ever seen it, pulsing in a rhythm unlike anything she was used to seeing from it.

"Kael," she said, careful. "Let’s go. Now. Please."

He didn’t answer. His eyes were still fixed on the creature.

"Kael!"

Something in her voice finally reached him. He stepped back, then another step, then turned.

"Run," he told Dana, who was still on the ground. "Run now."

Nadia helped her up, and Dana was crying silently, or trying not to cry out loud, which was a small difference that no longer mattered in that moment.

They ran, and the creature didn’t chase them this time. It just stood there, watching them go, as if it had already gotten what it came for.

They stopped after several long streets, against an abandoned wall, all of them out of breath, none of them able to look at each other.

"It could have been any of us," Nadia finally said, her voice shaking. "It could have been me."

"It wasn’t you," Dana said, her voice dry and full of grief. "It was Tommy. My father’s friend. I knew him for two hours, and he died for me."

Nobody said anything to that.

Kael looked at his hands, then at the distant gray horizon, then at Mira, who was watching him with a caution so careful it seemed like she feared something in him more than she feared the creature they’d left behind.

He thought that something had broken inside him in that moment, watching Tommy disappear with that terrifying quiet. He didn’t know yet what shape that break would take, or where it would lead him.

But he knew one thing with complete certainty: he would not let this happen again, not to any of them.

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