(Authors note) I’m starting Revisions!

Hi! First of all, if you made it this far thank you! (thank you Bretano and Suinicide in particular).

I'm going to spend the next two weeks or so going through everything already uploaded and making revisions with the critique I got kept in mind.  Once I'm caught up to release schedule I will probably already post the revised version of the new chapter each week and not bother with the 'lesser' version. I am battling with some health issues though so I hope you don't mind if it does take a little longer.

I would appreciate it if you could give me feedback on if the the first few chapters I revised today to make things better and if there is something else you'd recommend to better them.

Either way Saje out :D